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    critique Looking for feedback on a short film script I wrote titled We Don't Talk about Eddie- 9 page drama, suspense.

    Thanks for the feedback! * I mean she wears contemporary clothes but acts like a traditional housewife. * I'll make those changes about fixing up actions as parentheticals. * I'm planning to direct this script so I was planning on messing around with the lights in the room to signify the eerie...
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    critique Looking for feedback on a short film script I wrote titled We Don't Talk about Eddie- 9 page drama, suspense.

    The logline is: A young woman tries to find out what's going on as a eerie presence looms over the household. We Don't Talk about Eddie script Any feedback is greatly appreciated! Edit: Updated Version
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    Welcome thread post

    I'm a writer director on here looking for feedbacks on projects and also looking to give feedback.
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