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    screenplay "Running Loose" (~8 pages) - These are my first pages so feedback is REALLY appreciated.

    lol this is great, thanks
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    screenplay "Running Loose" (~8 pages) - These are my first pages so feedback is REALLY appreciated.

    Thanks so much for taking the time to read! Yes, I thought about the gas pump issue and thought that maybe they could ask Brad quickly but it felt clunky. Thank you for the formatting notes, I will have a revision and more pages soon. thanks again!
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    screenplay "Running Loose" (~8 pages) - These are my first pages so feedback is REALLY appreciated.

    Hello, I am an inexperienced high-school writer and I have been making short documentaries but have recently gotten into screenwriting. I have created the first pages to a script and would appreciate any feedback you have. Whether or not it's interesting, has good dialogue, proper formatting...
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    critique I wrote story premise but I don't know if it's worth developing need critiques. ~1700 word overview of a story

    Hello, I am a young inexperienced High-schooler and I have been making short documentaries but want to try something new. I need feedback on an idea for a feature I created based off of the game "One Chance" It is about an error in trials for curing cancer which goes wrong and releases a deadly...
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    Hello, I am new to screenwriting.

    Do you know where I can ask for feedback on here?
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    Hello, I am new to screenwriting.

    Hello I am 17 years old and based in Austin. So far I have made a documentary but loved the process of telling a story so much that I would like to get into script writing. Looking for advice and ideas.
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