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    script editor credit

    A script editor typically has an active, ongoing role. So as changes are made during filming, they make changes and track revisions. So just giving feedback on a script doesn't really qualify as a 'script editor'. You are welcome to express thanks or appreciation in the credits...
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    Question about short story length and scene from short

    When you use industry standard formatting, each page is roughly one minute of screen time. However, that is more a statistical truth. So the longer the script, the more accurate it becomes. However, a 10 minute short can range from 10-14 pages, most often about 12. I'm not about page counts...
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    Adapting a novel, but not adapting the whole novel.

    Before investing lots of energy, you need to understand that there are potential copyright concerns. You have a movie copyright and a book copyright. The original movie probably bought adaptation rights for the book. Just because you consider it a "fan film" does not grant you the right to...
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    Collibrate scriptwriting

    Hi Dror. A screenplay doesn't have to be in English. You could write it in Hebrew if you prefer unless you wish to submit it to a competition. However, a feature film is typically 90-110 pages in length with 95 being common. 21 pages is typically a short. It's difficult but not impossible...
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    Is their anything I can do to get around this audio recording law for my plot?

    You might go at it from a forensic pov. If I remember from previous incarnations, the villains videotape these events. Possibly in one of the films, we see a characteristic ring, tattoo or peculiar nervous habit. It may be seen in a mirror reflection that goes unnoticed at the time. Most...
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    New character - no image, only sound

    If I understand your question, do you give his physical description if we don't see him. The answer is no. You can describe him in the next scene. If you see his shadow or silohuette then you may wish to give a description of it. INT. BLACK ROOM - NIGHT The door opens and the silohuette...
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    Writing action sequences, without characters defying logic, just to have them?

    There is reason and there is emotional logic. A man with a knife faces a sheriff with a gun and slowly approaches. There sheriff tells him to stop. The man hesitates then starts his approach. The gun is pointed at the man and the sheriff is insistent. The man nears and they end up fighting...
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    A/V Script Formatting Opinions

    Okay, in CeltX 1. Open an existing script 2. Go to the top tab labelled "Script". 3. Click on it and from the dropdown menu select the "Adapt to ..." option. 4. From there, select "Convert it to A/V". This will get the image shown above. 5. You have a new tab labelled "A/V" next to...
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    Thank you for your note. I'm always open to collaboration. I have several projects I'm...

    Thank you for your note. I'm always open to collaboration. I have several projects I'm involved in at the moment, so understand it sometimes takes me a moment to respond back at times. However, I'd be interested in what we can accomplish together.
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    The Man Who Shot The Ket - (feedback please!)

    Honestly, I found it pretty boring. I got to the bottom of page 2 and stopped reading. Don't over use narration. There's not enough action to generate interest. In a 13 page script, your first two pages need to be strong. This is just a slow burn for me that fizzled out.
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    Is their anywhere I can research how gangs recruit new members in this case?

    1. If the police don't know who the gang members are, how can they possibly profile who would be a good candidate to fake in the first place? If you know there is an illuminati group in your town but have no clue what an illuminatus looks or acts like, it could be anyone. How could you...
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    Format for a sport type tv game show?

    Sounds more like you want to create a pitch. You might try tvwritersvault.com. They tend to serve as a medium for game shows and reality television. I believe they have a couple samples you can draft from.
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    Structuring 60minute Pilot TV Show

    In television, the end of your acts should have a cliffhanger or ‘hook’ so the audience comes back after the commercial break. This may sound confusing and contradictory but after you’ve written your screenplay, you’ll want to go back and divide it up into “commercial acts”. A one hour...
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    I want some pro to say how good am I?

    You need to write in a proper script format. As posted on your blog, the ideas are only fragments. So nobody would consider paying any money for these when completed, properly written scripts are readily available. Second, you might approach filmmakers in schools or areas close to where you...
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    Is their anything I can do to get around this audio recording law for my plot?

    H44, nobody here knows what the hell your script is about. You keep changing everything. What you said is your MC is raped and has no official recourse. Now the MC can choose to kill the villain, kill himself, run away or try something off-the-wall. You've eliminated the first because it's...
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