Hey, everyone.
So, I've been chatting back and forth with ChatGPT for the last few days to get feedback on this manuscript, which I have been working on, for a Concept Short-Film titled "Join The Marine Corps Today". But I thought that I would benefit from some less mechanical, and more human feedback instead, so feel free to read it. Please, let me know how you interpret the setting, story and character, whether the themes are reflected through the piece, and how it makes you feel. Make sure to also point out if anything confused you or could use improvement. Any ideas that could add to the piece are also appreciated.
Title: Join The Marine Corps Today
Genre: War, Action, Drama
Themes: War, Identity, the search for belonging.
So, I've been chatting back and forth with ChatGPT for the last few days to get feedback on this manuscript, which I have been working on, for a Concept Short-Film titled "Join The Marine Corps Today". But I thought that I would benefit from some less mechanical, and more human feedback instead, so feel free to read it. Please, let me know how you interpret the setting, story and character, whether the themes are reflected through the piece, and how it makes you feel. Make sure to also point out if anything confused you or could use improvement. Any ideas that could add to the piece are also appreciated.
Title: Join The Marine Corps Today
Genre: War, Action, Drama
Themes: War, Identity, the search for belonging.
