A newly-married man has to find a place in his house to hide his Uncle Tony's gun.
https://youtu.be/CTLF4ZFxz-Q
https://youtu.be/CTLF4ZFxz-Q
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archived-videos The Gun - a short film by Matt Janacone
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Hi there. Congrats on finishing your film. A few things.
1: Didn't finish it. The sound was pretty poor quality. You could fix it getting a zoom recorder and a better mic.
2: The cinematography was flat and dull. Check out the youtube channel 'every frame a painting'. You'll get some good advice there.
3: It looks like you shot it on your own. Get some mates down to help.
Hope that helps a bit.
1: Didn't finish it. The sound was pretty poor quality. You could fix it getting a zoom recorder and a better mic.
2: The cinematography was flat and dull. Check out the youtube channel 'every frame a painting'. You'll get some good advice there.
3: It looks like you shot it on your own. Get some mates down to help.
Hope that helps a bit.
it won't help, this guy never reads any replies he just creates threads to promote his blog and stuff.