What I liked is that you are always reaching for an interesting shot. Cinematography is interesting, engaging and I really like the fact you're trying to push the boundaries.
As a viewer, I felt some of the shots could've been better edited but it was always interesting.
I agree with this. The shots are great, but a few rail track or dolly moves (or even slow pans and tilts with a fluid head tripod) would do wonders for transitioning certain images. Ever since you posted DEVIANT, years ago, you have demonstrated a knack for strong visuals.