archived-videos The Pond - Canon T3i Short Film

Interesting idea sfoster. Perhaps I can add in a hand floating in the water at the end. Kind of that final scene in Deliverance
when a hand floats to the top of the lake
. Or something :)
 
Spooky. Like Sfoster, I was expecting to see something freaky though. I was a bit disappointed that there wasn't a shocker in there somewhere.

BTW, I liked the radial blur on some of the shots, but found it a bit much on others.
 
No probs, Chimp. :)

TBH, considering all the effort and excellent detail you put into your constructive crit of the work of others here, I actually feel bad for not giving you some more in-depth critical feedback. :P
 
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