Art film. Shoestring cheap and unprofessionally rookie. Made with a budget of $110.
http://youtu.be/cu378UjzBYE
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archived-videos Bodies in the Playground, Filmed with Nikon D5100
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it was good for the first minute and i liked it, however after that it got a bit boring and the end ruined it for me..
One question? How did you clean this and get your actors to agree to get so dirty. It was interesting.
I cleaned up afterwards with a mop. The actors are friends of mine who got excited about the idea when I told them about it. Thanks!
Sorry.
Thanks! I appreciate it!
First time applying makeup FX? You did remarkably well! 
The film definitely takes a big nosedive about a minute in, when all the bodies have been shown and it essentially repeats the same shots. Could have cut that middle chunk out, and used the credits as is - 'cos that shows even more... but it kinda works, even though it's longer than ideal, too.
Overall, pretty good. Very imaginative & creepy FX work.
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The film definitely takes a big nosedive about a minute in, when all the bodies have been shown and it essentially repeats the same shots. Could have cut that middle chunk out, and used the credits as is - 'cos that shows even more... but it kinda works, even though it's longer than ideal, too.
Overall, pretty good. Very imaginative & creepy FX work.
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I'll give it a thumbs up. I watched it to the end -- something that rarely happens here. But I agree with others that it could be tightened up. Either way, Good work.
Amazing short. I loved the mood, the makeup effects, and the cinematography. The swing part was very neat.
Not enough blood! 
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