archived-videos Funny Looking - Comedy Short

whayward91 said:
Braden is receiving some funny looks from a very funny looking guy...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVV5XS6z4co&hd=1

Starring:
Braden Guy
James Walters
James Hallam

Directed by Braden Guy
Camera by Jamie Downes
Edited by Warren Hayward

See more of our videos at our channels at;
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i didn't get it personally and as a british comedy was slightly disappointed, and what was up with the audio?

not slating just my opinion
 
8salacious,

Why point out the negative things about the video? it would bring them down and kill their motivation. On the other hand, you have different fingers....

Kidding, on the other hand, you can point out their qualities and see them flourish in what they're good at... just my opinion anyways.

PS: I'm definitely willing to check out your video to point out what you are good at, I would be more than honoured.
 
crossmiles8 said:
8salacious,

Why point out the negative things about the video? it would bring them down and kill their motivation. On the other hand, you have different fingers....

Kidding, on the other hand, you can point out their qualities and see them flourish in what they're good at... just my opinion anyways.

PS: I'm definitely willing to check out your video to point out what you are good at, I would be more than honoured.
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your right i apologise for sounding negative, but i just didn't get it, i didn't find it funny, i tried to say that as british comedy as I'm british myself it didn't click, the audio was cutting in the air, which i can clearly hear unless at that point youtube was being funny with me, and im very open to criticism it makes me know what i should improve on.

i would like to point out that I'm not a professional film maker but I'm also too honest, i saw it from an audience point of view, and was like um....

how would i make the video better? well i wouldn't have the audio cutting funny for a start, also i would have had more camera shots on the two guys faces and made them express real emotions as to show like what the hell is this, and maybe have the funny face guy do something normal at the end as a sign of controversy infact id swap the one guy for a girl and make it a date of some sort and have that funny face guy just appear and do that, like make it interesting.. i dunno i can't say much, i just didn't like it..

but again i don't mean to sound rude or put them down but thats how i saw it..
 
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