Good job there,
The story was fun, the timing was good and the actor did a fine job too, congrats!
I read one of the comments on youtube that said "what if [this film] was also an ad?" Have you thought about that as an alternative ending?
Anyway well done!
Enjoyed the story, reminded me a bit of a series called 'Black Mirror' which was shown over here in the UK. I agree with Zensteve on the lighting, and also I think the audio of the dialogue needs a bit of work, improvement over your last short though! Did you use your new mic this time?
Enjoyed the story, reminded me a bit of a series called 'Black Mirror' which was shown over here in the UK. I agree with Zensteve on the lighting, and also I think the audio of the dialogue needs a bit of work, improvement over your last short though! Did you use your new mic this time?