archived-videos Becreative 30 Second Advert Entries.

[Alvinetfilms]

Hello all, I'm entering a competition with my school called BeCreative.

http://www.filmeducation.org/becreative/

The brief involves making a 30 second advert about respecting film and tv,etc. The brief is a little long for a brief.

Anyway back in september I made an entry for it but decided it wasnt good enough and didnt work effectively with the brief at all. It also didnt make sense because of how little time I had.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3pUMjUNZu4

Then I went ahead and made a second one yesterday with my cousin and it was a completely different take on it. It was a comedy sort of thing, and all my feedback so far off of my family/friends has been great

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLxtBewTWh8

Which one do you like better? Which one should I use?

 

[Murdock]

As is, I like the second one better. But I think there is some good comedy to be had from the first.

In the second, why is the AV industry down?

 

[Alvinetfilms]

Like i said we only had 30 seconds so it wasnt very easy to capture the message and still make it entertaining in that amount of time. I couldnt manage to fit at any point a mention of why the AV industry is down, i did record it, but i had to cut it down.

 

[Dreadylocks]

The brief is a little long for a brief.

This made me chuckle. Brief is an adjective meaning short in duration but it is also a verb meaning to
"instruct or inform someone thoroughly, esp. in preparation for a task." And when you brief someone on paper, that document is called a brief.

 

[Alvinetfilms]

This made me chuckle. Brief is an adjective meaning short in duration but it is also a verb meaning to
"instruct or inform someone thoroughly, esp. in preparation for a task." And when you brief someone on paper, that document is called a brief.

Oh okay that makes much more sense :S i feel stupid now, but im only 15 so il allow it.

 

[Alvinetfilms]

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