archived-videos My 1st Short Film - AL

Wallaceja · Jul 5, 2011

Hi guys please check out my first student film if you have the chance, any tips/pointers for my next project would be great! Took me about half a school term to make.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msgDOxGxZ_0&feature=channel_video_title

Cheers

pen · Jul 5, 2011

I like it! where did u get the music piece by the way? it's great. I loved a lot of the scenes.

Wallaceja · Jul 5, 2011

pen said:
I like it! where did u get the music piece by the way? it's great. I loved a lot of the scenes.

Thankyou

I've always been a fan of the artist Mogwai so i basically went through and listened to all his songs - I wrote the story from scratch by listening to 'I Know Who You Are But What Am I' on repeat. I also had to slow it down in editing because I felt it was a bit too fast paced.

pen · Jul 5, 2011

oh, was it ok to use copyrighted songs?

rayw · Jul 5, 2011

Interesting story to tell there.
I was kinda grumbly about the color up until AL's heart was put back together. Took a bit of time, but I got it.

Murdock · Jul 6, 2011

I couldn't make it past 2:30. Man it was dragging. And the piano: bong, bong, bong, bong, bong, bing, bong, bong.
Let me try again, but I'm flipping forward.

EDIT: Yea this was draggin way too much for me. IMHO you could have shaved 2-3 minutes off this and still have a fine movie.

Wallaceja · Jul 7, 2011

Yeah time was one of my main troubles with the film - I just didn't know which parts of the film to shave off. Any suggestions to specific places where things could have been tighter?

Thanks

Murdock · Jul 7, 2011

Wallaceja said:
Yeah time was one of my main troubles with the film - I just didn't know which parts of the film to shave off. Any suggestions to specific places where things could have been tighter?

Thanks

Look for dead space that doesn't serve a purpose. There are times where you want to linger, but not all the time.