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recycling - vomit draft

Garbage truck woke me up this morning while I enjoyed my day off, and BAM! Short idea flew right into my head..

What do you think?

It does need lots of work, i know, but i just had to put the idea on the paper





INT. KITCHEN - MONDAY

Folded beer box folded behind the filled garbage can.

Clean bright kitchen. Sound of WATER RUNNING. Dozen of clean
and emptied glass bottles, cans and plastic bottles fill up
a counter top.

WOMAN, mid 20s, scrub off the labels of the bottles, and
washes out an empty beer bottle.

Woman pulls out a full garbage bag, and picks up empty
cardboard pizza boxes

Magnet on the refrigerator door says "RECYCLING! HELP THE
ENVIRONMENT!"


EXT. FRONT YARD - MONDAY

Two large trash bins in front of the house. One garbage and
one recycle bin.

Woman approaches the bins, opens the lids and throws in her
garbage bags.


INT. KITCHEN - TUESDAY

Some food gets brushed off from the dining plate into a
garbage can.

Woman goes through the same repetitive process of washing
off the bottles, and scrubbing off the labels.


EXT. FRONT YARD - TUESDAY

Woman exists her house, and with garbage and recycling bag
in each hand.

As she aproaches the garbage bins, she notices the third
bin.

Sticker reads

COMPOSTABLES

HELP TO SAVE OUR PLANET!

Woman unsurely opens up her garbage bag and digs out some
old left over food. A small cloud of fruit flies fly out of
the bag.

(CONTINUED)


CONTINUED: 2.



Carefully, she transfers some mixed left over food from the
trash bag into new compostable bin.

Woman thows away the remaining trash with recycles, and
shuts the lids.


EXT FRONT YARD - WEDNESDAY

Woman opens the front door and as she holds a garbage bag,
and stops.

Additional two garbage bins were placed next to old ones.

Labels say "GREASED PAPER" and "FUITS AND VEGETABLES. NO
MEAT!". Both bins have additional label lower.

"PLEASE HELP US TO SAVE THE PLANET"

Woman, irritated, approaches the bins, opens up the bags,
and starts sorting out trash.


EXT. BACKYARD - THURSDAY

Woman steps outside her house with several little bags. Her
eyes widen in disbelief. She approaches the trash cans.

In front of her, EIGHT new recycling bins with different
tags: "HAZARDOUS", "BROWN GLASS", "COLORED PAPER", "WHITE
PAPER", "WOOD", "CLEAN PLASTIC"...

Each of them has the same sticker

THANK YOU FOR HELPING OUR SICK AND STRUGGLING PLANET

Woman looks over to her neighbor house. They have large
amount of recycling cans as well.

She signs, shakes her head, and puts down the bag, as she
rolls up her sleeves.


EXT BACKYARD - FRIDAY

SOUND OF A GARBAGE TRUCK BACKING UP.

GARBAGE MAN, in a filthy jump suit, a broken cigarette, and
headphones, walks pass the bins, as he flips each and every
one of them open.

He looks inside of them, smirks, and rolls his eyes.





Picks up each bin individually, and throws every recycle bin
and garbage bin into one large garbage can.

EOF
 
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yea, something like that.

There are some things people do that in the end are completely useless.

Or maybe some people try to help sooo much but the results of their actions doesn't really make that much of the difference.

i dunno, just playing around with the idea.
 
Maybe add the character who is putting up the signs, the instigator of it. Then you're leaning towards pointing out that even if *one* person does care, it takes a whole chain to make a difference.
 
Absolutely great OP.

I'm also nauseated by morons that think where they put an apple core has some correlation to earths atmosphere

from wiki

The atmosphere has a mass of about 5×10^18

Anyone know what that 18 means? it means 5 Quadrillion tons. Thats a real number.

Every person in America that has sorted trash combined since the beginning of the enviromental movement has less effect than building one new nuclear reactor and shutting down a coal plant.

Ironically, it's these same people that believe smashing a coke can will effect physics on a cosmic scale that go to town hall meetings and protest these reactors.

If you want to feel like a hero even though you are lying to yourself and everyone else, join an activist group. If you want to help save the world become a SCIENTIST. Or at a minimum, read what real scientists have to say, instead of listening to the tie-dyed T-shirt you got from greenpeace.
 
I like that a lot. Funny. Just don't drown it out in bad music (I imagine high pitched twiddles).


@Nate - I personally own a tie-dye T-shirt, but I cut the sleeves off so I look like a Badass.
 
Guys, we're in the middle of the largest extinction event in the history of the planet.

Not really.
Not even close.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Permian–Triassic_extinction_event
320px-Extinction_intensity.svg.png


Please... back away... from the kool-aid. :lol:
 
Oh, right, scientists:


SANTA BARBARA, Calif., Oct. 21. 2008 (UPI) -- U.S. scientists say the Earth is in the midst of its sixth mass extinction of plants and animals, with nearly 50 percent of all species disappearing.

Biologists at the University of California-Santa Barbara say they are working to determine which species must be saved.

"The current extinction event is due to human activity, paving the planet, creating pollution, many of the things that we are doing today," said study co-author Assistant Professor Bradley Cardinale. "The Earth might well lose half of its species in our lifetime. We want to know which ones deserve the highest priority for conservation."

Cardinale said the last mass extinction near the current level, the Cretaceous Tertiary extinction, occurred about 65 million years ago when a meteor struck the Earth. It's best known for causing the extinction of non-avian dinosaurs, as well as numerous plant species.

"Given that we are losing species from ecosystems around the world, we need to know which species matter the most and which we should pour our resources into protecting," said first author Marc Cadotte.

Cadotte, Cardinale and co-author Associate Professor Todd Oakley report their findings in the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences.
 
What they are referring to there is an artificial extinction event rather than a natural one.

Many things become extinct all the time, as the world changes.

Are we making a lot of things extinct now? Yeah, sure. To make room for people. Whenever a dominant species emerges whether it be mammalian, insectoid, or otherwise, other species are pushed out of the ecosystem.

Are humans abusing that concept like never before? Yes. Just keep in mind that survival of the fittest is hardly "unnatural"

The real issue here is that you can't help. You just can't. At least not directly. The things that are being done to harm the environment on the levels you are describing are done by Corporations and Governments that you have absolutely zero control over. Did someone in your neighborhood pave a rainforest. Well then, maybe you're barking up the wrong tree telling them there's something they can do about it. Carbon offsets? Don't make me laugh.

It would take TRILLIONS of dollars, and a shift in attitudes at the highest levels of wealth and power to really make a dent in this thing. Put the can down and write your congressman. Only laws and research will fix this.

If you think I'm wrong about this "one man can't make a difference directly" thing, I invite you to reverse the problem and see if it works there.

Let's everybody in the forum go outside with the biggest hammer we can find, and try to destroy the earth. Tell your friends, make t shirts, hold a block party, buy a muscle car, put an engine block in your front yard and just run it all day with no muffler and oil leaking.

We'll meet back here in two weeks, and see how much of the earth we've destroyed. If the green rolling hills and clear blue sky outside my window are still there, I'll say you just can't make a big environmental impact smashing stuff with your friends. (if everyone in America did this at once? Keep dreaming)

Oh, but future generations? Campaign for Nuke power, get into politics, or do something substantial that will affect the actions of millions. For every 10 hippies, there is a refinery, you can't win this fight one volunteer at a time.
 
Oh wow haha.... sorry guys, didn't mean to make some controversy going on..


Anyways.. so... ahem



is the story good? lol

Yeah, you did the classic reveal very well there. Quick and effective.

I don't think it's is much a controversy as it seems like, we're both actually pro environmental, just different versions of the same side perhaps
 
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