archived-videos Zombie Survival Guide Rap- My first music vid

[will_mcdaniel]

Hi there all,

this is my first attempt at shooting a music video. I wrote, 'rapped' and shot it all myself. I'm happy with how it turned out, but then I'm probably slightly biased...

Basically I'd be interested on an outsider's perspective on anything- pacing, composition, whether it's actually funny etc...

But, as always, I'd be grateful for any feedback really

Cheers

Will

http://youtu.be/68iV6cED4-0

 

[gorillaonabike]

As a viewer, I thought it was OK. Was pleasant and raised a smile or 2 here or there and by the end was mildly positive.

As a film maker, I am very positive about the solid technicals, crisp editing, use of graphics to retain viewer attention.

 

[will_mcdaniel]

As a viewer, I thought it was OK. Was pleasant and raised a smile or 2 here or there and by the end was mildly positive.

As a film maker, I am very positive about the solid technicals, crisp editing, use of graphics to retain viewer attention.

Thank you for watching it!

Thanks I did put a lot of time and effort into the editing so I'm glad you liked tat side of it.

I was more confident in the music video than the song itself, but a few smiles are better than none!

I'm aware I'm not about to set the world on fire with my rapping abilities and take the music scene by storm! The song was supposed to be a bit tongue in cheek as I was very aware of my limitations and was purposely trying to make myself very stiff and 'British' in terms of delivery.

Thanks again!