archived-videos Zombie Love, my directorial debut, Please take a look

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I would appreciate any feedback and opinions from the film, and the writing of the film. I’m aware of the audio balance and it will be fixed.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1R0Z8J5sBQE
The story is about teenage love (Julie & Joey), only with a twist. The zombie virus has been out for a few years and the CCD has developed a cure, but it will be 8-10 weeks before it is available to everyone. During this time Joey’s family is attacked (off camera) Joey gets bitten and Julie is hiding him in the woods to protect him until the treatment is available. During his transformation into becoming a zombie, Julie is doing everything in her power to help Joey keep his humanity. She brings him pictures every day, and reminds him of all the love they have for each other and their plans of getting married. Also, we find out that Julie, although she is only a HS senior, is pregnant with Joey’s baby (before he is bitten). Julie also feeds Joey two times a day raw meet so he will not feed off of humans. The plan seems to be working until Julie’s brothers tell dad (played by me) that she is up to something in the woods. Dad is concerned for his daughters safety so he grabs his gun and investigates with his two boys and a neighbor kid.

Thanks in advance,
 
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it has potential I think, I get the impression this is like a first take and you could do it all again with better camera angles and sound mixing.
 
I refuse to watch anything that has zombies as a theme anymore. It's really getting old.

This was good though, especially considering this is your directorial debut.
 
Sound is my biggest issue, we only used the built in mic. No doubt I have a lot to learn. How was the pacing? We cut alot of dialog, should more be cut? If so where? How long shuold this be?
 
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