You've got some beautiful shots in there. The ones that play off of the contrast between light and dark are really nice.
You've also got some shots where I have to struggle just to see what's going on, simply because they're not properly exposed. A big part of filmmaking is taking control of the light.
On a side-note, I don't know why this popped in my head, but I suspect you could do some really cool things with slo-mo.