Your Thoughts...

You've got some pretty good material in there. The reel itself needs work, though.

Realistically, noone's gonna watch past 90 seconds - you're at almost 4 minutes. Get all your good material in that first 90 seconds, where it will be seen. (fwiw, I'd drop that recent bit from the b/w mirror guy, as well as some other down-beat or mournful pieces)

Heh, not bad at all though. Very distinct look & voice. :cool:
 
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