Would someone be interested in reading this short script?

[Firm1]

Hey guys,

I was just wondering if anyone would be interested in reading a 30 page screenplay my brother and I wrote. We'd really appreciate some feedback from other writers.

Synopsis:

A small group of men find themselves in the middle of a dark forest being hunted by a mysterious army of terrifying creatures as they try to make sense of their past and why they can't seem to die.

PM me if you're interested. Thank you!

 

[Cracker Funk]

Seems like you're not done with it. The screenplay you sent me is 52 pages, and finishes with CONT:

I'm sorry, I did not read more than a few pages. I promise, I'm not saying this to hurt you. I think you need a bit more structure. I wholeheartedly recommend Save the Cat!

You've got the storytelling bug in you. That's great! And you're looking for guidance. That's also great! I suggest you do some reading and watch a whole bunch of movies. Keep it up!

 

[Firm1]

Thanks for taking the time to check it out man! I'll have to check it out.