archived-videos World Cup Protest Gone Wrong

[will_mcdaniel]

Would love any feedback on my newest comedy short- especially regarding he sound or effects.

Cheers!

Will

http://youtu.be/eGlUPZhq5W0

 

[RyiGarry]

Very weighty punches - the camera movement & effects. The only thing that's jarring is the cut @:34 - the ball jumps up and then is flying across. Not catastrophic, but something I noticed on the first watch.

I liked it, though - good concept and execution

 

[will_mcdaniel]

Very weighty punches - the camera movement & effects. The only thing that's jarring is the cut @:34 - the ball jumps up and then is flying across. Not catastrophic, but something I noticed on the first watch.

I liked it, though - good concept and execution

Thanks for giving it a watch!

Yeah watching it back I can see what you mean; another shot in between would have helped it. Would be quite a tricky shot to get though but useful all the same.

Thanks again for watching and for your fedback

Will