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archived-videos World Cup Protest Gone Wrong

Very weighty punches - the camera movement & effects. The only thing that's jarring is the cut @:34 - the ball jumps up and then is flying across. Not catastrophic, but something I noticed on the first watch.

I liked it, though - good concept and execution :)
 
Very weighty punches - the camera movement & effects. The only thing that's jarring is the cut @:34 - the ball jumps up and then is flying across. Not catastrophic, but something I noticed on the first watch.

I liked it, though - good concept and execution :)


Thanks for giving it a watch!

Yeah watching it back I can see what you mean; another shot in between would have helped it. Would be quite a tricky shot to get though but useful all the same.

Thanks again for watching and for your fedback

Will
 
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