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archived-videos When to Kill - Short Film

Parts of that were disturbing...I think that is good.

Some of it was filmed a bit too dark for my tastes, but I think I see your motivation for that.

The scene where the star bursts into the office building to get the location of the hit has really bad sound quality in the dialog. It almost sounds like you used a camera mounted stereo mic for that one exchange. It didn't match the sound in the rest of the short.

I thought it was pretty good if a bit draggy at times. It needed more pop.
 
Mr. KSJONES -
Did you close down that street you filmed the chase on - if so how did that process work of getting a permit or such?
 
Thanks for watching everyone, and thanks for the input. MrSadler, I don't want to incriminate myself or others as this was done a bit guerilla style haha, if you want to know the details, PM me :)
 
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