Not so much a screenwriting question as storywriting in general. I took a class to help my screenwriting, and a lot of these classes will learn from Shakespeare. However, I find his plays are filled with a lot of metaphores and analogies to make points. Not just a few, but a lot, just to described one thing often. I can see maybe needing to use one analogy to make a point, but why almost a dozen in a row, sometimes? Just make your point and move on to another part of the plot.
I have written two features so far, with as many twists and turns as I could fit, and I'd say it they about five times more plot than any Shakespeare play I have read or seen performed. The reason why is because I kept the analogies and metaphores down to a bare minimum. Now I am not saying I am a good writer, or better than Shakespeare at all for that matter. Just don't get why have analogies, when you can have plot?
I have written two features so far, with as many twists and turns as I could fit, and I'd say it they about five times more plot than any Shakespeare play I have read or seen performed. The reason why is because I kept the analogies and metaphores down to a bare minimum. Now I am not saying I am a good writer, or better than Shakespeare at all for that matter. Just don't get why have analogies, when you can have plot?
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