Hi All,
My co-writers and I finally have a draft of our script that we think is ready to hear read by actors.
We have got a date and the cast all set.
We have invited some of our filmmaker/screenwriting friends whose opinions we trust. We were thinking of, after the reading, having a little feedback session.
Instead of just opening it up and saying "So, what did you think?" We were thinking of specific questions that might get the discussion rolling in a way that is helpful towards our future rewrites or revisions.
Can anybody think of some starter questions like that?
For instance:
"How would you describe (the protagonist) and what would you say her driving need is?"
"What was the first moment you felt like you really needed to see what happened next?"
"Do you feel as if the script had a true ending? What were your feelings at the end?"
"If ___________ did not happen to this character, how would you have felt?"
"How did you feel about ________ (B Story Character?) If this character were to not be in the movie at all, would it be the same movie?"
"Is there a movie that this reminds you of in tone, themes or style?"
Would really appreciate any questions people can think of.
My reason is this: I've attended many readings of other people's screenplays and plays and I always thought that the feedback or talkback portion is much more productive if the writer starts off asking questions to the audience, rather than the audience asking questions of the writer.
I just don't think it is as useful when the writers start getting asked: "So how did you come up with this idea?" Or if somebody starts simply trying to analyze the movie like a critic.
I also, after the engine gets going on the discussion, want to ask the hard questions:
"Did it feel too long? "
"When were you way ahead of the movie, (meaning were you already realizing where some things were going, ten pages before the characters?"
My co-writers and I finally have a draft of our script that we think is ready to hear read by actors.
We have got a date and the cast all set.
We have invited some of our filmmaker/screenwriting friends whose opinions we trust. We were thinking of, after the reading, having a little feedback session.
Instead of just opening it up and saying "So, what did you think?" We were thinking of specific questions that might get the discussion rolling in a way that is helpful towards our future rewrites or revisions.
Can anybody think of some starter questions like that?
For instance:
"How would you describe (the protagonist) and what would you say her driving need is?"
"What was the first moment you felt like you really needed to see what happened next?"
"Do you feel as if the script had a true ending? What were your feelings at the end?"
"If ___________ did not happen to this character, how would you have felt?"
"How did you feel about ________ (B Story Character?) If this character were to not be in the movie at all, would it be the same movie?"
"Is there a movie that this reminds you of in tone, themes or style?"
Would really appreciate any questions people can think of.
My reason is this: I've attended many readings of other people's screenplays and plays and I always thought that the feedback or talkback portion is much more productive if the writer starts off asking questions to the audience, rather than the audience asking questions of the writer.
I just don't think it is as useful when the writers start getting asked: "So how did you come up with this idea?" Or if somebody starts simply trying to analyze the movie like a critic.
I also, after the engine gets going on the discussion, want to ask the hard questions:
"Did it feel too long? "
"When were you way ahead of the movie, (meaning were you already realizing where some things were going, ten pages before the characters?"