watch What Film Critics Are Worth

[mus]

I need some feedback on this ultra short video


(and possibly help coming up with a new title.)



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJ0JQBkXm0U

 

[mus]

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[Zensteve]

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Indeed.

Like most of your material, you have a genuinely good setup weighed down with extra baggage.

Cut that down to 30 seconds, start to finish. Keep the core of it; comedy comes in threes.

Dunno what to suggest for new title, but yes... it needs a new one.