What do you think of my first short film?
- Thread starter korodno
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i got great advice online about shorts. Never put credits at the beginning. Get straight to the story. I'll write more later.
It may be my phone, it happens, but the dialog and the video arent in sync.
It appears the film was made needlessly longer with filler dialog. Could have attempted nnonlinear to stimulate interest for the viewers.
The acting and/or directing could have been better.
Another thing, the color grading was too bright for a horror, psychological thriller.
It may be my phone, it happens, but the dialog and the video arent in sync.
It appears the film was made needlessly longer with filler dialog. Could have attempted nnonlinear to stimulate interest for the viewers.
The acting and/or directing could have been better.
Another thing, the color grading was too bright for a horror, psychological thriller.
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My phone crapped out on me half way through. ...........Darn! Will try to finish it later. From what I saw, good for a first. Be careful with too much dialog. I would like to see them characters move around more. Actors are pretty good. The male lead really fit the part.