archived-videos What do you think I could improve on???
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Ok, I'll bite -- you'll need to improve the lighting inside the tunnel. The shot of the actors in the tunnel back lit by the exit is good - so was the shot of the person lying on the ground. Both are good examples of using extreme contrast to convey darkness. The other footage in the tunnel was not -- we could not see anything and would be an excellent reason to quit watching the video. You don't have to light the entire tunnel -- just provide enough light to provide a lot of contrast to the image. Even if we don't know exactly what we're seeing, at least there is an image to look at.
Good luck.
Good luck.
There was not sound for the first 10 seconds.
You need some serious wind protection on the mic in the opening outdoor shot.
The sound inside the "sewer" is very crispy - it has a lot of high end and not much body.
The balance between the music and the rest of the sounds needs a lot of work. I can't understand anything the" sewer rat" says except for the yelling.
Overall it didn't really do anything for me partially because I couldn't really see anything going on and there wasn't enough in the way of sound to give me more information.
BTW, I don't think they had the GoPro camera in 2007.
You need some serious wind protection on the mic in the opening outdoor shot.
The sound inside the "sewer" is very crispy - it has a lot of high end and not much body.
The balance between the music and the rest of the sounds needs a lot of work. I can't understand anything the" sewer rat" says except for the yelling.
Overall it didn't really do anything for me partially because I couldn't really see anything going on and there wasn't enough in the way of sound to give me more information.
BTW, I don't think they had the GoPro camera in 2007.
So....he gets raped inside a sewer?
PIT OF DESPAIRRRR!!!!
To be serious, some shoots look good like the shot filmt from inside the tunnel to outside showing a silhouette of the person sneakin in.
Jou dont need the sound of the flasback.
PIT OF DESPAIRRRR!!!!
To be serious, some shoots look good like the shot filmt from inside the tunnel to outside showing a silhouette of the person sneakin in.
Jou dont need the sound of the flasback.
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You don't have anything good going on at all here.
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