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Pretty well done, I liked the special effects and sound. It would have been nice if there had been more obstacles, like maybe he remembered getting shot, and limps for part of it, or maybe he questions his delusions or hallucinations a little bit, or interacts with the doctor the same way he does with the enemy soldiers. But overall an interesting premise.
And, to be honest, we could go about another 20 years without a single movie having anything to do with vets damaged by their combat experience. It's way beyond time to give that one a LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG rest.
Thanks for the comments. I agree it has been overdone, but this was done a year and a half ago. So at the time I wrote it it wasn't being flooded into all these films.