archived-videos Wanting your honest feedback for my films...

[Sweeney Jet]

GREETINGS!

LANCE the ROMANCE is my comedy web series that I'm basically using to practice film-making more often. Well, we filmed the Season Finale promptly after I wrote the script. I must say it's definitely a new direction for the show, and I like it. I hope you do too, especially if you didn't care for the raunchiness of some of the previous episodes... IF you saw it.

I'm trying more and more to make the storyline better, in the realm of Lance. So, just sit back and don't take it too seriously. The concept is based on the stupidity and "randomness" my generation seem to embrace (ie. Family Guy).

Thank you. Very much.

L A N C E Season One Finale PART 1:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbxd4oA1VMc

L A N C E Season One Finale PART 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppAh38_RKPU

P.S.

Please check my other stuff. PLEASE spread it around. I want people of all backgrounds to watch and give me HONEST FEEDBACK, so I can improve my body of work and my craft. I LOVE filmmaking and I just wanna get better at it, that's why I keep making stuff with my limited resources. I can't even afford the Jag35 ST that I want so badly.

RASPBERRY OFFICIAL TRAILER
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8xc_kNyo3k

LOST Tribute: A Quiet Epidemic PART 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l4mzubvhmE4

LOST Tribute: A Quiet Epidemic PART 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NY9mal-95vE

 

[L.I.F.E.]

I watched some of the season finale in your other post and I don't get it.

 

[Sweeney Jet]

Understandable. It's a little confusion, since I had to revise and improvise some of the storyline since some of the actors unexpectedly left and I had to think quick. But what don't you get?

 

[Utopia]

I don't get why one guy has powdered donut powder on his face and another guy has a skii mask and another guy has a bandaged head.

I'm totally lost.

Sorry =/

 

[M1chae1]

I think you've got a great mind, and some of your ideas and humor are awesome. I just think it's too messy and amateur overall to watch in its entirety.

Sorry. I think you need to take more time at the craft of filmmaking, and *then* use your unique perspective to create great stuff.

 

[L.I.F.E.]

Yea I'm with ROC, I love that you have such a passion that you film a whole series. That ambition is awesome! I just didn't understand the powdered donut face guy, or why the guy teleported, or the guy wrapped in gauze.