archived-videos Volunteers? A Short Comedy

rlebar · Apr 24, 2012

Hi everyone, I'm new to the forum and I would love any comments that you have on my new short film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7aBQ4JLk38

I also just finished another more experimental science fiction film "A Rivulet in Time"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MVGoBufBYM

Critiques welcome!

Murdock · May 21, 2012

It wasn't funny so much as it was uncomfortable.

justinisfilming · May 21, 2012

Murdock said:
It wasn't funny so much as it was uncomfortable.

I'd have to agree. Maybe getting better actors would've saved it? Idk.