watch Very short Comedy - Bed Wetting

[mus]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C5w8ETK93Hg


All that feedback stuff is deeply appreciated

 

[mad_hatter]

Funny idea, however, I think this would've worked better had you not had the two cuts. The cuts make it obvious that this is all a pre-planned sketch, which doesn't fit with the build up. One continuous video would've appeared more like a "real" YouTube prank, and wouldn't take the viewer out of the joke.

Why are those cuts there? Did the take go wrong?

 

[mus]

The cuts are there for two reasons: One, to immediately identify this as a parody of prank videos, and not a real prank video. I wasn't trying to fool anyone into thinking it's real, but the problem is, some people wouldn't be able to tell the difference (that's also why the lightning looks so over-the-top fake)

The second, and more important reason: I didn't want to ruin my toaster. Lol.... I actually threw in a tub of baby wipes, and then tracked an image of that toaster over it.

 

[sfoster]

funny, keep up the weekly stuff!
is your subscriber base growing?

 

[MissingProductions]

Hahaha, brilliant!

 

[mad_hatter]

I actually threw in a tub of baby wipes, and then tracked an image of that toaster over it...

Ha! Good work. I wouldn't have noticed had you not said. Looking closely, you can see that the reflection doesn't change. But for the few frames it's on screen, it works perfectly!

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Honestly, your work is improving. The quality of your videos is going up and each time I find myself laughing harder. Keep up the great work.

 

[mus]

is your subscriber base growing?

Yes it is, I've been checking it every day


And thanks for all the feedback guys, it means a lot

 

[mus]

I think this one has risen the fastest in views, too