As I am writing the screenplay for IC3 - The Singularity, I am cutting out more and more dialogue.
My rules for keeping dialoguue are these:
1. Is it short enough to sound like real dialogue? People don't talk in complete sentences and they use a lot of contractions.
2. What does the dialogue do for the story? Does it build the characters and any back story?
3. Can the story survive without the dialogue? If the dialogue is pulled out, does the scene and scene to follow survive?
My rules for keeping dialoguue are these:
1. Is it short enough to sound like real dialogue? People don't talk in complete sentences and they use a lot of contractions.
2. What does the dialogue do for the story? Does it build the characters and any back story?
3. Can the story survive without the dialogue? If the dialogue is pulled out, does the scene and scene to follow survive?