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Trailer For The Kawaii Electric Company - Feature Length Student Independent

Hello,

Looking for some critiques on a trailer that we just put out for a feature-length:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxPhPIoqEzc

TKECFilm.com

Would love any criticism or feedback you can offer.

Thank you!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxPhPIoqEzc&feature=colike
 
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Most of the dialogue snippets are non-sequitur in nature, and do not help flesh out the trailer.

Since there's virtually nothing in the way of "action" propelling the scenes, it's relying on that dialogue to do it... and it doesn't.

The actual audio's pretty dodgy, too. Doesn't help

Tbh, sounds like you have a great idea for a film. Your trailer's just not selling it. The actual film could be awesome, for all I know.

I see you've got a screening on the 30th! Hope it goes well, man. :cool:

Edit: First 20 secs makes sense, btw. Breaks down after that.
 
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I did not really get an emotional connection from watching it. It did not draw me in.

HOWEVER decent cam work, lighting and sound. Give it some PUNCH ! IMO
 
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