This is a trailer made with adobe premiere, do comment and criticize.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7JzlWrFq1o0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7JzlWrFq1o0
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Fairly decent.
You mixed footage sizes and didn't adjust.
As Zen said, your timing is off in some parts.
I found you didn't stretch your storytelling skills as well as you could on this one.
Take a quick look at this one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7HyMl5wJ0s0
They managed to tell a story, keep you interested by keeping it about the characters and mix it within the action and more powerful scenes.
You mixed footage sizes and didn't adjust.
As Zen said, your timing is off in some parts.
I found you didn't stretch your storytelling skills as well as you could on this one.
Take a quick look at this one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7HyMl5wJ0s0
They managed to tell a story, keep you interested by keeping it about the characters and mix it within the action and more powerful scenes.
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Guess i still have to learn 
. 10x I will try to do a better job next time .
. 10x I will try to do a better job next time .