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Please help us out! We have some large plot gaps that need to be fixed when filming the finale TERMINUS. Give this a look see and we'd be much obliged!
The story:
Kevin Josten [Name unknown until Resistance] lived a normal life before something tragic happened. This thing is unknown, but now he is forced to work for a counterfeiter called the Embassy. After a deal goes sour, Kevin discovers that the people he worked for murdered his sister and that they have betrayed him. He finds that his boss has been murdered by the same people he was making a deal with and makes a choice; to murder. This changes his life forever when he runs out of time and he is captured by the Federal Black Incorporation [F.B.I.; actually a corrupt organization working with criminals, making it look like they are helping put crime down when it's all show.] and is trained for 5 years, then forced to kill unexplained important figures in politics. Kevin finally escapes and makes a pact that he will kill the people and end the Federal Black Inc., but when they discover the sinister plan, they attempt to
counter it, but fail.

Now that Kevin has killed the leader of the agency, the federal government is in a state of panic; they make an ultimatum and choose a new representative for the FBI, and they are now making their presence known to the nation; they begin to work with the embassy and martial law is deployed on many states. Kevin works with many people to rise up through the chaos and ultimately destroy the Agency, but all is not finished. The embassy now controls the currency trade with other countries, trading counterfeited money for real money. They are threatened with war and it almost seems inevitable that America will fall. [Ending withheld.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v20uSB73l9g

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZpwxT65_7Xs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sOAEe5AO7VU
 
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Any tips? And don't feel the need to apologize for anything that might feel like flaming, friends; we know there are massive mistakes and plot gaps. We need your help to improve. Thank you. (:
 
joey1320 said:
Before I watch any of the vids, is there a sequence we should do so in?
What exactly are you looking for from us viewers?
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In the order they are posted; the third is the teaser for the final episode, and I want you guys to watch them and see if the written plot matches up, and what we can work on to fix everything. Like I said, don't worry about sounding rude or anything; we know there are a lot of mistakes.
 
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