archived-videos Till' Death

Hey everyone, my names Sean and I'm new here on the forums, so I thought the best way to start off would be to post one of my films and ask for some criticism! So heres the lowdown;

Film Title: "Till' Death"

Summary: This film is a fictional depiction of the day in the life of the Nebraska Mall shooter leading up to the actual shooting.

Other: So I made this film last year for a film festival at my school. I am the only actor that appears in the actual movie, and i also edited & filmed it by myself. I already am aware that i need to remove the captions during the movie, because I realize how tacky they are, and i think I'm going to go back and re-mesh some of the audio in the car scenes. If you guys could give me any other criticism or ideas, that would be awesome!

Video Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYK4Yk6jOT8
 
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