archived-videos Three Degrees - High School Short Film

[Artin]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=anaNsMi2EuY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=anaNsMi2EuY

Hello Indietalk, I've been working on this short film for about a month or two and it's finally done, and I'm pretty happy with it. I'm sending it out to high school film festivals in about a week, but I wanted to get some outside opinions on it first.

 

[Marshall_Tyler]

First of all, I thought this was very well done.

About half way through I couldn't help but notice that almost all the shots had been slowed down and thought it might have been due to the shakiness of the camera.

Other than that, I have no complaints. The opening sequence in the dimly lit room was edited really well.

 

[Artin]

First of all, I thought this was very well done.

About half way through I couldn't help but notice that almost all the shots had been slowed down and thought it might have been due to the shakiness of the camera.

Other than that, I have no complaints. The opening sequence in the dimly lit room was edited really well.

No shots were slowed down, actually. The tracking shots were all with a flycam nano stabilizer. It's a little bumpy but it's better than nothing. Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it! What did you think of the story, was it easy to follow?

 

[IhateMyjob]

Very nice! Way better than the stuff my area high schools were turning out when I was there. That last "squeeky" sound track was hard to listen to, but I thought it worked with the mood you were going for.

As for this.

What did you think of the story, was it easy to follow?

I liked the story! Not so easy to follow that it's boring/predictable, but easy enough to follow that it all comes together nicely in the end.


I'm just a beginner, but those are my thoughts!