archived-videos THE SNIPER short film

[rishi851]

Hey guys. This is my first short film I had made in a 3 month course a few months back. I'd love to hear your opinion: the good/bad everything.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMR2bj5tc78"]http://https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMR2bj5tc78

 

[gorillaonabike]

Firstly, congratulations on making this. It's a movie!

Secondly, in terms of the bad, it needs to look 'real' in every respect. Visuals, sound, acting etc... At the moment, it doesn't.