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THE PARK (short film) Canon t3i

Ok looks like I have to play bad guy again... First the scenes where you skip a couple of frames were done badly, the scenes of just the girl went on for a bit too long and almost made me fall asleep, the constant focus in and out was a bit too much, not sure what you was trying to make me see but it just ended up irritating me, I would have liked more random shots of everyday things, cinematography was ok, 6/10

But it was ok, just my honest opinion on things..

What didn't you like about it?
 
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