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The Omission Trailer

This is a trailer to our upcoming psychological thriller. It's based off of an idea I had when I was a kid. I used to wonder about existence. Thanks for watching. I know the cinematography and special effects isn't perfect but I'm getting better. I love recreating the ideas in my head. Cheers!
 
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I know it doesn't compare to many of the videos that you guys have uploaded lately but I still wanted to share it with yall.
 
Looks fine to me! Has a very dreamlike quality...

The woman shooting herself in the head isn't terribly convincing because she just keels over and blood appears on the camera. Other than that the FX were fine (supporting the supposition that it was intentionally dreamlike, ?)...

One thing I'd change would be to make your title cards shorter...
 
Ambitious is good!

If you want to show it around, I'd say snip about 20 seconds from the top of it. The text isn't very engaging because it's static, so you can move it through quicker.

That's my thought. Other than that, it's a learning process! Keep learnin.
 
Thanks guys. Yeah Nickclapper. It's supposed to be dreamlike, because the character is wanting to kill himself and his whole world is based on his subconscious so that's why everything around him is going to hell while he's emotionless. Thanks for the advice and encouragement brother.

Thanks Kholi. I will make a note of that about the text. Thanks for the advice.. every little bit helps.
 
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