I've polished this short script to a shine that I'm happy with for the moment (though there are a few lines of dialogue of one scene I've get to complete), and am looking for some fresh eyes to examine it. I should also mention that the end is not intentionally anti-climactic - but is forced to be so because of my budgetry limitations.
Also, apologies for the working title - as a fan of Stanley Kubrick I wanted to include a little joke on The Killing.
It's Off
Any feedback would be appreciated.
Also, apologies for the working title - as a fan of Stanley Kubrick I wanted to include a little joke on The Killing.
It's Off
Any feedback would be appreciated.
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