• ✅ Technical and creative solutions for your film.
    ✅ Screenplay formatting help, plot and story guidance.
    ✅ A respectful community of professionals and newbies.
    ✅ Network with composers, editors, cast, crew, and more!
    🎬 IndieTalk - Filmmaking and Screenwriting help site and community.
    By filmmakers, for filmmakers since 2003

archived-videos The Investment Scandal. Debut Short film.

J

JoshuaJWilsdon

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W4adEj1-5Ns&feature=g-upl&context=G215898cAUAAAAAAABAA


A debut short film. We had no budget and no crew.
Please if you could comment and let us know what you think it'd be really helpful. :)
It is Jamies first time at directing, and Joshs first time acting for screen.
Also, the music starts to buzz in one part, not sure why.

Directed by Jamie Roach.
Starring Joshua J. Wilsdon.

Thanks very much.

Music is originally from Inception.
NO COPYRIGHT INTENDED HERE.
 
Last edited:
Upvote 0
I watched the entire thing. There was an awful lot of walking while holding a bag going on. Also, for visual effect a bigger gun would hav3 looked better in the hands of that big guy. Yours looked like a starter pistol.

That said, it was pretty decently done although I felt it dragged a bit at times in my opinion.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top