archived-videos The Girl in the Photograph

[charlie95148]

I am a senior high school student who is just a few weeks away from graduating. I've been working on this short since the beginning of the school year, and I would like some input on how the final product turned out, please! It is based on the CreepyPasta of the same title: "The Girl in the Photograph".

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WY7gMtrz5aY

 

[Zensteve]

Great ending, but man oh man it was painful getting to the end.

Take a razor to this and slash out four minutes easy. Tighten up even more after that.

You have a genuinely creepy tale going on here, that is mired down. You can still save it.

Also... read up on the forums about lighting & sound. I think that needs a bit of attention, too.