archived-videos THANK YOU to this forum! My FIRST short is updated/done!

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5-21-17 UPDATE: I filmed a few extra scenes to break up the static shots + added a brief piece of dialogue to add some depth

5-20-17 UPDATE: I read more about color grading so did some of that + changed the tile font + added in a sound effect I originally took out

I've learned so much over the past few weeks. What an awesome community.

Mega thanks to Scoopicman for dealing with my incessant messaging :D

I have a LONG way to go but I am proud of my first attempt at writing, shooting, and editing.

http://vimeo.com/zmyounus/theauspice
 
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Hey there, just watched your movie. First of all congratulations for completing it. Now, for the real deal. On your next film, write your screenplay without editing—a rough. Now research online (google) the scenes in your movie. Watch similar scenes created by the pros. Study the lighting, composition and music/sound. Watch as many as possible. Choose a style that suits your movie, copy it. Tarantino does it all the time. Picasso did it in the art world. This will make your next movie 100% better. Have fun in the journey. Jim
 
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