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archived-videos Tennis Short Film made in 48Hours

Not to bad. I didn't really understand the War and Peace connection but I may just be a little dense. I liked the shot composition of them getting ready. I felt you could have done a little bit with the lighting in there as well but they were interesting none the less. I am not a big fan of the hand held that you used outside but I think that is also more of a preference thing then a critique. Great pacing. Hope to see more from you in the future.
 
Hmm, I liked it.
Some bored me a bit but overall it was put together quite nicely. The camera work was pretty good and most of the clips rolled over to each other pretty well.

Keep it up =)
 
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