editing Teaser trailer rough cut

[dlevanchuk]

Hey everyone,
I'm putting together a teaser trailer for my first feature, and about to lock the video to start work on sound.
What do you think, visual wise? Are there any awkward cuts, or do you see anything extra or maybe the trailer doesn't work at all?

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[wheatgrinder]

looks good..
Id drop a few frames to give the high action shots a bit more speed.. specifically the pen stab at :38

Music is cool and seems to fit..

 

[dlevanchuk]

Oh, good catch on a stab. Will do! Thank you

 

[mus]

thanks for the link to the site at the end, i was gonna ask for that.

and personally, i wouldn't change a thing (except screen the entire thing right here, right now!!)

 

[dlevanchuk]

Sreenesh-yep, a shoulder rig.
Mussonman- awesome thanks!