watch Tear this thing a new one!

[Jade R]

Alright, you know the drill. Let me know what you think of my new short film, The Morning Ritual. It's a very visual film so please pay close attention and watch it in its entirety. I hope this isn't too much to ask. All comments are welcome and honesty is key! Thank you very much ahead of time to all of those who venture forth! haha Please enjoy!

https://youtu.be/5s9AzF-ySjM


Music By:
"On the Ground" Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

"Impact Moderato" Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

"Pobre de mí" by Arponera
(http://www.facebook.com/pages/Arponera/276716449017124)

"The News Is Always" by The Cute Lepers
(http://www.thecutelepers.com/)

"Черт" by Гладилин-Булгаков-Самохин
(http://freemusicarchive.org/music/--_1615/__1407/03_-_Chyort)

"Give me back my plant" by SOB Pariassound
(http://www.myspace.com/sobpariassound)

"Woebegone" by Moth Equals
https://mothequals.bandcamp.com/

"On Brevity" by Josh Woodward
http://www.joshwoodward.com/#/

 

[pictureplanet]

No judgements can be made....

Nothing grabbed my attention in the first 2 minutes. Knowing another 12 were looming, I started rewatching Wainy Days.

 

[Jade R]

No judgements can be made....

Nothing grabbed my attention in the first 2 minutes. Knowing another 12 were looming, I started rewatching Wainy Days.

Fair enough. Thanks for giving it a go.

 

[gorillaonabike]

Congratulations on completing a short.

As you asked for honesty, I would say I would need a plot, something interesting happening, characters and dialogue. In fact, anything at all would've been good.

I went to two minutes where nothing happened, skipped to 4 minutes where nothing seemed to be happening etc...