mikemintzdj Oct 25, 2016 #1 A sentient Robotic dog goes in search of Santa Claus in a nuclear winter, along the way he discovers a secret buried in the destroyed world.
A sentient Robotic dog goes in search of Santa Claus in a nuclear winter, along the way he discovers a secret buried in the destroyed world.
mlesemann Staff Member Moderator Oct 25, 2016 #2 I'd cut the word "sentient" - I don't think you need it & most people (unfortunately) won't understand it. But otherwise I like it! Upvote 0 Downvote
I'd cut the word "sentient" - I don't think you need it & most people (unfortunately) won't understand it. But otherwise I like it!
A alex ma whitmer Oct 26, 2016 #3 For the record that is a LOGLINE, not a TAGLINE And it not a good one. Keep working on it. a Upvote 0 Downvote