Hi all!
I thought you could perhaps help with something of mine I am writing for my script.
It is a part synopsis/logline, whichever term you would like to give it, but I would like to know if you can have a read of it, and see whether it makes sense to you, if it excites you to want to know more, and if you get a jist of what the story is> Your constructive input would be most helpful! Thanks!
Synopsis: [The Desolation of a Dream: Part 1]
UK businesswoman Grace Abaddon, celebrates her most prestigious night at an awards ceremony for her work in business and enterprise. She has succeeded in places many people couldn't, and is at the highest of her field. But someone was pulling the stings. The perilous underlayer of her brilliance is coming to light, and knowing that all good things come to an end, a price is ultimately paid. The beginning of this character study, marks the end of her influential reign, devised from her cunningness and insatiable efforts to power. In this Art-House drama, we are spectators of this shining figure, who inevitably falls from Grace...
Synopsis by Marcus Ebanks
I thought you could perhaps help with something of mine I am writing for my script.
It is a part synopsis/logline, whichever term you would like to give it, but I would like to know if you can have a read of it, and see whether it makes sense to you, if it excites you to want to know more, and if you get a jist of what the story is> Your constructive input would be most helpful! Thanks!
Synopsis: [The Desolation of a Dream: Part 1]
UK businesswoman Grace Abaddon, celebrates her most prestigious night at an awards ceremony for her work in business and enterprise. She has succeeded in places many people couldn't, and is at the highest of her field. But someone was pulling the stings. The perilous underlayer of her brilliance is coming to light, and knowing that all good things come to an end, a price is ultimately paid. The beginning of this character study, marks the end of her influential reign, devised from her cunningness and insatiable efforts to power. In this Art-House drama, we are spectators of this shining figure, who inevitably falls from Grace...
Synopsis by Marcus Ebanks
