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Suffer The Wrath - Buried In Blood(Music Video)

Excellent editing.

Couple of things. Three, really.
1 - The match cuts, intentional/planned or not (I hope they were), were provocative. I liked them.
2 - What would be really cool, and this may be done to death already (I don't watch too many music videos), is in one rapid cut sequence have Shot A tracking towards the subject while Shot B is tracking out. Could also be done left & right, up down, etc.
3 - The relatively front and centered shots of Mr Vocalist (to be polite) became rather stale. Could have benefited from some french shots above & below, or some more elaborate movement of either the subject or camera.

Nice work.
 
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