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stranded - a short film

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Nice short! I really like the look of the film. It felt like an old-fashioned 80's horror flick. It also had some genuinely scary moments. Nice acting as well. I think that the premise is somewhat unoriginal, and the believability is lost as the film goes on. I don't like when people do that Grudge/Ring/Shutter/Eye girl either. It seems overused. Despite the minor flaws, I think you have done well :)
 
Thanks for the feedback, Chimp. Glad you thought there were some scary moments. I hear you about being unoriginal, man. We were trying to create a monster/ghost as cheaply as we could (zero budget). I know it's not a good excuse, but it's what we had to do! ;)
 
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